The graph shows the percent of academic facilities in 2012 between male and female.

The graph shows the percent of academic facilities in 2012 between male and female.
The bar chart illustrates the count of academic
staff
in the Arts, business, education, law,
medicine
, and science
faculties
in 2012 based on gender. In general, the majority of faculty employment was male.
In contrast
,
medicine
had a sharp
gap
between males and females. In terms of males in the
faculties
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staff
, we can see the highest proportion was in engineering, with a count of 85%.
Furthermore
, the number of men employers more a half was business, law, and science, which the value were approximately 65%, 60%, and 63%, respectively.
Therefore
, the highest
gap
between male and women employers was in engineering, with the
gap
being a fourth of total employers. Regarding female jobs in the several
faculties
, we can see the highest
staff
in education
faculties
was women, with the number of
staff
reaching more than 70%. Followed by arts,
medicine
, law, science, business, and engineering, where the value of women
staff
were approximately 58%, 50%, 40%, 38%, 35%, and 15%, respectively.
Moreover
, the small
gap
between males and females was faculty of
medicine
, which was a
gap
of only approximately 1%.
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