The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.

The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
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The table below compares a restaurant's average business conditions in three branches in Vancouver in 2016.
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, the three branches had different best sellers respectively.
Besides
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, the
one
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on
Georgia
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Street
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had the highest figure among all sections no matter
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the number of eat-in or takeaway transactions and the transaction
value
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without a doubt.
According to
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the information shown in the table, the branch located on
Georgia
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Street
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sold the best as its average number of sales was 854 with a
value
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of $10.69 which was almost two times higher than the transaction
value
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of the
one
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on Dunsmuir
Street
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as it was only $5.61.
On the other hand
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, the transaction
value
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of the
one
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on Drake
Street
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was $902 which was close to the
one
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on
Georgia
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Street
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although
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its average number of transactions was only 390 which was even 50% lower than that of the
one
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on
Georgia
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Street
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, georgia, street, value with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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