The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.

The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
The table below compares a restaurant's average business conditions in three branches in Vancouver in 2016.
Overall
, the three branches had different best sellers respectively.
Besides
, the
one
on
Georgia
Street
had the highest figure among all sections no matter
of
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the number of eat-in or takeaway transactions and the transaction
value
without a doubt.
According to
the information shown in the table, the branch located on
Georgia
Street
sold the best as its average number of sales was 854 with a
value
of $10.69 which was almost two times higher than the transaction
value
of the
one
on Dunsmuir
Street
as it was only $5.61.
On the other hand
, the transaction
value
of the
one
on Drake
Street
was $902 which was close to the
one
on
Georgia
Street
although
its average number of transactions was only 390 which was even 50% lower than that of the
one
on
Georgia
Street
.
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