The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.
The diagram illustrates the processes by which
coffee
is produced from beans
and sold in markets. Overall
, there are eleven stages starting from picking the coffee
beans
and ending with packing them into jars.
to begin
with, the production of coffee
starts by harvesting beans
from trees and drying them under sunny conditions. Subsequently
, beans
are roasted and immediately put in a container and made cool. Meanwhile, with the special equipment, the beans
are ground and become coffee
powder before being soaked in hot water . Additionally
, In the next step, hot water is added and then
strain the mixture.
As is shown by the diagram, in the following process, the mixture of water and beans
should be frozen again with the previous machine it has grinned. Therefore
, the mixture of coffee
beans
is dried in a vacuum. Finally
, coffee
beans
are packed in marked jars and delivered for sale in retail supermarkets.Submitted by sh.sharifpour79 on
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