The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
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The bar chart gives information about how many tickets were sold to
sports
events, theme parks and movies in 2009 and the table reveals ticket prices to various venues in the same year. Going to the cinema was both the most popular and the cheapest form of entertainment in 2009. The
overall
message from the data seems to be that the cinema was the most affordable recreational option.
Whereas
enrollment figure for
sports
was the lowest choice. Cinemas attracted more people than theme gardens and
sports
combined. Whilst 1,050,000 people attended movies, only a third of that number visited picturesque fields, and a mere 150,000 went to
sports
games. Movie tickets were far cheaper than other forms of entertainment Attendance at a football game in 2009 cost around $73, with little decline for families. Basketball and cricket games cost less, at $34 and $24 respectively for a single admission.
However
, a family ticket to cricket, at $80, showed considerable savings. These places were only slightly less expensive than football matches at $70 a single, but there was a significant reduction in the price of a family concession with four people gaining entry for the price of three. Movie tickets at $15 for one, and $55 for four, were the cheapest.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attendance
  • entertainment venues
  • admission prices
  • visitors
  • comparison
  • percentage
  • revenue
  • cost-effective
  • correlation
  • trends
  • marketing strategies
  • fluctuations
  • cultural events
  • accessibility
  • demographics
  • peak season
  • off-peak
  • consumer behavior
  • pricing strategy
  • profit margin
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