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the table below shows stastistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

the table below shows stastistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
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The table
ilustrates
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illustrates
 a
number
 of statistics regarding international tourism in
top
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the top
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 five countries particularly in 2012 and 2013. It is noticeable that
number
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a number
the number
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 of
tourists
 was ordered from highest to lowest
number
.
To begin
 with, France is most country that
visited
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was visited
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 by
tourists
 in 2012 and 2013. It was proven by the statistics of
trip
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trips
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 that reached 83 and 84,7
milion
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million
 for each year.
Whereas
USA
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the USA
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, Spain and China are in the middle position, which attained quite a lot of
number
visit
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visits
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 namely between 50 to 70
milion
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million
 in 2012 and 2013.
In addition
, Italy achieved
lowest
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the lowest
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number
 of
tourists
 in both
year
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years
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 namely 46,4 and 47,7
milion
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million
.
Then
, In terms of
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a
the
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number
 of
tourists
spending
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spent
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,
USA
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the USA
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becomes
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became
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 the country that
spend
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spent
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much
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the most
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 money on
tourists
spending
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apply
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with
number
 namely $126,2
bilion
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billion
 in 2012 and $139,6
bilio
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billion
 in 2013.
Next,
Frace
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France
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, Spain and China do state spending for
tourists
 with
number
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a number
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 of expenses between $50 and $60
bilion
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billion
 in 2012 and 2013.
Lastly
, Italy
positioned
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is positioned
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 to become
country
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the country
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 that
spend
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spends
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least
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the least
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 money
in
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on
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tourists
 spending namely $41,3
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billion
bilion
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billion
 in 2012 and $43,9
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billion
bilion
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billion
 in 2013
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