The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and line graph provide information about
last
year
's crime
in the United Kingdom.
Generally, both pie
chart and line graph compared the cause of the Correct article usage
the pie
crime
committed in last
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the last
year
.
Firstly
, the table provides information about the correlation between age and number
of crimes. The x-axis shows the age range of Correct article usage
the number
criminal
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criminals
was
between 12-60 years old. The group of ages with Unnecessary verb
apply
most
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the most
a most
crime
committed was between 12-28 years old, the Fix the agreement mistake
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crime
were
mostly committed by a 20 years old criminal with Change the verb form
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80
% rate of crimes. Correct article usage
an 80
While
the criminal with age between 28-60 committed less than 20% rate of crime
.
Secondly
, The pie chart shows the crime
committed last
year
was dominated by violent crime
with 46% from
the total. The second most committed Change preposition
of
crime
was property crime
with 23% and
followed Correct word choice
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with
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by
crime
with slightly
lower percentage Correct article usage
a slightly
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22%. Public order Change preposition
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crime
remained as
the rarest Change preposition
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crime
committed in the UK last
year
with just 9% from
the total.Change preposition
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