The chart above provides information about the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in the 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart above provides information about the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in the 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The given bar chart indicates a breakdown of eaten fresh food in the UNITED KINGDOM based on demographic data in three distinct years 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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seen that the highest figures
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to 2006.
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, the data in 2010 closely followed in 2002.
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were the most
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. In detail,
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consumption rate started
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22% in 2002,
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28% in 2006 we saw a slight fall in subsequent
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when it ended
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24% in 2010. There was a similar trend witnessed for women in
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% in 2002, 32% in 2006 and 27% in 2010. Children
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contrast, consumed the least volume of fruit and vegetables in all mentioned years. The greatest quantity was consumed in 2006 by 16%, these proportions for 2010 and 2002 were 14% and 11% respectively.
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