The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the population in the UK who
eat
Wrong verb form
ate
recommended
quality of fruit and Correct article usage
the recommended
vegetables
in 3 different years
:2002, 2006, 2010
.
Correct word choice
and 2010
Overall
, it is clear that
in three years
women consumed the highest amount of fruit and vegetables
, while
children’s consumption of the
Correct article usage
apply
vegetables
is
Wrong verb form
was
lowest
. Correct article usage
the lowest
Moreover
in Add a comma
Moreover,
2006
people consumed more Add a comma
2006,
vegetables
compared with 2002 and 2010.
Look at the graph for more detail, In 2002 about 22% of men consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables
, whereas
this
figure for women was one-quarter. After 4 years
, statistics for both genders experienced considerable
increase by approximately 6%, figures were 28% and 32% respectively.
In the same way between Add an article
a considerable
years
2002 and 2006 data on the figures, which shows consumption of Correct article usage
the years
vegetables
for children experienced significant
rise from 11% to 16%. Add an article
a significant
Despite
, in 2010 the ratio of men and women who ate Correct pronoun usage
Despite this
recommended
amount of Correct article usage
the recommended
vegetables
declined to 24% and 27% respectively
, Rephrase
apply
similarly
Rephrase
respectively
this
figure for children witnessed a fall of 2% in 2010 year.Submitted by hebibli.eli on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetables, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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