The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012.

The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012.
The given table illustrates information about world
electricity
production
by using renewable resources from 2009 to 2012. The
electricity
production
was given in Trillion Watt hours (
TWh
).
Overall
, the highest supplier was hydraulic
power
,
while
the lowest was solar
power
. The other noticeable point is, that the
electricity
from all five renewable sources depicts an upward trend in the entire span. Moving to the details, in 2009, 3329
TWh
of electric
power
was generated by using a hydraulic source, after that, it climbed slightly by 3663.4
TWh
in 2012.
Moreover
, wind and bio-mass
production
reveal
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nearly the same amount of
electricity
production
over the period given.
However
, wind
power
has generated more
power
, compared to bio-mass.
On the other hand
, solar and geothermal were the lowest
electricity
production
sources, compared with the other three renewable resources.
Furthermore
, in 2009, solar
power
and geothermal produced 21
TWh
and 67.4
TWh
of
electricity
respectively. On top of that, in 2012, bio-mass
production
was five times higher than geothermal
production
, which was 326.2 (
TWh
).
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