the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now ,and plants for its development. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.
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The two maps show the main changes
of
Islip Change preposition
in
town
center
currently and in the future.
In general, Islip Change the spelling
centre
town
center
will become Change the spelling
centre
a
much more accessible, Correct article usage
apply
with
adding Change preposition
by
shopping
Correct article usage
a shopping
center
to the bus station and Change the spelling
centre
dual
carriageway.
By looking at the Correct article usage
a dual
detail
from maps, the future development of the Fix the agreement mistake
details
town
has more way
of transportation. The shape of the Fix the agreement mistake
ways
town
will convert to an oval shape also
, the countryside will cut
down. Add a missing verb
be cut
Moreover
, they will build more houses and the single road will convert to dual
carriageway. A Add an article
a dual
the dual
pedestrians
will build. Another change is that the part will be smaller Fix the agreement mistake
pedestrian
also
, the bus station and car park construct near the shopping mall however
the shopping mall will become smaller.
In conclusion, by predicting the future development the town
will become more modern also
, the
transportation will become more comfortable. On the other hand
, many houses will add and the housing problem will solve. The town
will have change
Wrong verb form
changed
with
great detail.Change preposition
in
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