the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now ,and plants for its development. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.

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The two maps show the main changes

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show examples

Islip

town

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center

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centre

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currently and in the future. In general, Islip

town

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center

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centre

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will become

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apply

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much more accessible,

with

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adding

shopping

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a shopping

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center

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centre

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to the bus station and

dual

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a dual

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carriageway. By looking at the

detail

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details

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from maps, the future development of the

town

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has more

way

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ways

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of transportation. The shape of the

town

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will convert to an oval shape

also

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, the countryside will

cut

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be cut

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down.

Moreover

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, they will build more houses and the single road will convert to

dual

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a dual

the dual

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carriageway. A

pedestrians

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pedestrian

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will build. Another change is that the part will be smaller

also

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, the bus station and car park construct near the shopping mall

however

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the shopping mall will become smaller. In conclusion, by predicting the future development the

town

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will become more modern

also

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, the transportation will become more comfortable.

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, many houses will add and the housing problem will solve. The

town

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will have

change

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changed

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with

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great detail.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

162 words

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