Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should write ● What building are you writing about? ● Describe the current condition of the building. ● What should be done in this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to poor
condition of Add an article
the poor
historical
light tower building. The building is Correct article usage
the historical
historical
one and witnessed many historical events. There is rich history Correct article usage
a historical
is
linked with The Unnecessary verb
apply
light tower
.
The building is now derelict. There is Correct your spelling
Light Tower
plethora
of wear and tear which has happened in the building Add an article
a plethora
due to
the poor maintenance. Furthermore
, it has now become place
of anti-social activities and Add an article
a place
the place
flocked
by Add a missing verb
is flocked
pick pocketers
and criminals Correct your spelling
pickpocketers
in
Change preposition
at
night
Add an article
the night
due to
poor lighting arrangements. Stray animals like Dogs are roaming around the city.Moreover
,the entire site looks like an abended
village.
The derelict building should be restored on Verb problem
abandoned
immediate
basis. The arachnological department should initiate Correct article usage
an immediate
construction
process. The light tower should be Correct article usage
the construction
patrol
by police Wrong verb form
patrolled
in
night. I would suggest police should have Change preposition
at
police
station there to check Correct article usage
a police
activities
of anti-social elements. Apart from that lighting should be installed.
Yours Faithfully,
Marsh McLaneCorrect article usage
the activities
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs are well-developed and each contains a single, clear idea. Consolidate related information to enhance coherence.
coherence cohesion
Include a suitable opening and closing to your letter. The closing did not include a full name, which is expected in formal letters.
task achievement
Clearly state your request and be sure to elaborate on your points sufficiently. Each paragraph should be expanded to fully explore and explain the issues and solutions you're presenting.
task achievement
Use a formal tone that's consistent throughout the letter. Avoid informal language to maintain the professionalism expected in a letter to an editor.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite