The diagram below show information about the production of beer.
The given diagram illustrates the
process
Use synonyms
which
involved in the beer making. From the diagram, Correct pronoun usage
apply
it is clear that
there are 10 Linking Words
Use synonyms
process
that was Fix the agreement mistake
processes
is
instructed.
Started off by milling the malted barley and followed by mashing them with enough amount of water. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, the mixtures will be separated in the lautering Linking Words
process
in order to give the spent grain Use synonyms
for
cows to feed. After that, sugar and hops will be added Change preposition
to
in
the boiling Change preposition
to
process
Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
Correct word choice
and then
place
Wrong verb form
placed
them
Correct pronoun usage
apply
on to
the whirlpool machine to be processed.
Before it should be Change preposition
into
fermentate
with yeast, Correct your spelling
fermented
cooling
Correct article usage
a cooling
process
was needed. Use synonyms
Then
, it moves to the maturing Linking Words
process
prior Use synonyms
its
time to be filtered and put into the packaging in order to sell it.Change preposition
to its
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