The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the monthly
price
fluctuation of three specific metals including copper, nickel, and zinc over a year in 2014.
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Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
although
nickel experienced the most remarkable changes, the cost of copper remained almost stable.
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According to
the given image, nickel had the biggest rise in the beginning Linking Words
months
of the year with 6% and 4%, respectively. Use synonyms
Then
it increased slightly in March, April and May. Linking Words
In contrast
, the Linking Words
price
reduced significantly by -3% change by the end of June and Use synonyms
this
trend continued until October. Again, at the two ending Linking Words
months
of 2014, the ascending slope returned and the Use synonyms
price
rose 1% in each of November and December.
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In contrast
, the zinc Linking Words
price
analysis shows that the Use synonyms
price
change was additive in the first 5 Use synonyms
months
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then
, after 5 constitute Linking Words
months
of reduction, the variations were positive by approximately 1.7 and 2% in November and December, respectively. Use synonyms
In addition
, copper was the most consistent metal among these three. In fact, except in May and June, Linking Words
this
product’s cost fluctuated between 0.7 to 2% positively during 2014.Linking Words
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