The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the monthly
price
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fluctuation of three specific metals including copper, nickel, and zinc over a year in 2014. 
Overall
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, it is evident that
although
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nickel experienced the most remarkable changes, the cost of copper remained almost stable.
According to
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the given image, nickel had the biggest rise in the beginning
months
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of the year with 6% and 4%, respectively.
Then
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it increased slightly in March, April and May.
In contrast
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, the
price
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reduced significantly by -3% change by the end of June and
this
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trend continued until October. Again, at the two ending
months
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of 2014, the ascending slope returned and the
price
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rose 1% in each of November and December.
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, the zinc
price
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analysis shows that the
price
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change was additive in the first 5
months
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and
then
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, after 5 constitute
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of reduction, the variations were positive by approximately 1.7 and 2% in November and December, respectively.
In addition
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, copper was the most consistent metal among these three. In fact, except in May and June,
this
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product’s cost fluctuated between 0.7 to 2% positively during 2014.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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