In the contemporary epoch, a huge part of some countries' population consists of youngsters in comparison to elders number. I personally believe that
this
issue can bring many advantages and disadvantages.
In other words
,
this
is two sides of a penny.
However
, from my point of view, the cons
the pros
due to
the reasons discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, adolescents are the most precious cohorts in every
country
and can play a significant role in their
country
's fate because of some factors like body health.
In addition
, youngsters have more energy and
to get involved in difficult occupations which necessitate physical
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and so forth.
Furthermore
, every developing nation needs
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for national
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projects and
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number of young adults can fulfil
this
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to their other counterparts. To illustrate an example, my grandfather built an enormous marvellous stone bridge in his youth, but
he passed away, he was not even able to go to
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by himself and was totally disabled.
In contrast
to youngsters, any old individual not only has not his full health
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but
also
may have some serious problems and needs someone taking care of him.
Moreover
,
this
crowd of lower-aged people would get old soon and by looking at nowadays society, we can recognize
this
trend after a
years and the
country
has to accept the old nation it has. Another major effect of having a colossal number of young immigrants in a
country
is that the opportunity to get hired in a prospective job would gradually
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for the young citizens who have studied and shoe
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to get their dream job.
Thus
, there should be a balance in having both populations in the society.
To conclude
,
this
is true that every
country
needs fresh and powerful workers and it would be more efficient to have more of them but they have to make a balance between over and under ages to prevent long-term problems. To put
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a nutshell, having a balance in
this
problem is a better choice for survival
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