The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The two maps give detailed information about the floor plan of a public
library
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20 years ago and how it is looking now.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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most of the changes have happened in
this
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library
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at four corners of
this
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map. It is
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worth mentioning that some facilities
such
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as furniture have been added or omitted all over
this
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library
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.
To begin
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with, tables have been removed which are in the centre of the
library
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and 20 years ago on the right side, there were no adult fiction
books
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but they have installed an information desk and self-service machines.
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, the enquiry desk has been moved to a café and the children’s
books
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to a lecture room. In the centre of the left side, there were adult fiction
books
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but now
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of these all reference
books
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have been placed.
On the other hand
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, the reading room has been alternated with a computer room and CDs, videos, and computer games have been taken out and that place has become children’s fiction
books
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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