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The chart below shows the market share for different Internet browsers between 2007 and 2014.

The chart below shows the market share for different Internet browsers between 2007 and 2014.
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The table below illustrates the market share for four various types of internet
browser
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 between 2007 and 2014.
Overall
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, the shares for
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Internet Explorer
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explorer
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 and
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firefox
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Firefox
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 decreased over the time period, whilst for
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chrome
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Chrome
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 and
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safari
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 they increased.
Safari
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 accumulated the least amount of revenue, whilst
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chrome
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Chrome
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explorer
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Explorer
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 generated the most. More than half the shares in 2007 were composed of
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explorer
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Explorer
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, 56%, followed by
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firefox
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Firefox
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 with a statistic of 36. Both
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chrome
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Chrome
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safari
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 had low numbers of 0 and 1.8%. Over the next few years,
explorer
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 declined to half its original figure in 2010, with a numeric of 27.5.
Firefox
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 had a moderate rise to 43.5,
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chrome
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Chrome
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 experienced a dramatic incline to 22.4.
Safari
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 nearly doubled its shares with a figure of 3.8. Between 2010 to 2014, there was a steady decline for both
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explorer
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Explorer
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 and
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chrome
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Chrome
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. In 2014,
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explorer
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 had lost 7 times its original value, ending with a statistic of 8%.
Firefox
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 decreased, but at a smaller percentage and had a final numeric of 23.6.
Chrome
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 continued to exponentially rise and had the highest number of 61.6.
Safari
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 experienced some fluctuations but finished with 3.7.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words explorer, firefox, chrome, safari with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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