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Advantage of using electronic device in the classroom

#advantage #device #classroom
The importance of using electronic devices in the classroom has become more common in the modern time. I
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 that its have some advantages easy to access by laptops their productivity will
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.
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the final verdict. To start with, the most prominent
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 is that students store their studies
lecture
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 and make notes easily
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 laptops.
While
 studying learners
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 more
creatives
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 and they learn about presentation display to everyone.
Moreover
, nowadays all subjects related to Practicals and modern technology
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 business, marketing strategy,
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and engineering
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 based on project management and design
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all with
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electronic
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of electronic
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 devices which students
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design with the
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 of
software
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the software
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 Photoshop or Adobe
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this
 they start part time jobs.
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disadvantage
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by
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 using electronic devices on
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 daily basis in
classroom
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the classroom
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 pupils
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 their health
such
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, they don't remember anything
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structure
Ensure your essay has a clear introduction, at least two well-developed body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Each body paragraph should start with a clear topic sentence and be followed by supporting details.
completion
Your essay appears incomplete as it lacks a conclusion. It's critical to finish your essay by summarizing your main points and restating your position to provide a complete response to the prompt.
clarity
When presenting ideas, aim for clarity and coherence by organizing them logically. Make sure there's a clear progression of thought from one sentence to the next.
examples
Include more specific examples to support your points. These not only demonstrate understanding but also contribute to the coherence and depth of your essay.
focus
Keep the focus on the prompt. Each paragraph should relate to the advantages of using electronic devices in the classroom, and any disadvantages discussed should be clearly contrasted to maintain a balanced argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enhanced
  • Interactive
  • Engaging
  • Instant access
  • Resources
  • Collaboration
  • Personalized learning
  • Educational software
  • Digital literacy
  • Eco-friendly
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