The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions from 1980 to 2010
The graph provides information regarding the number of
travelers
visiting four distinct tourist sites in Scotland over the Change the spelling
travellers
period
from 1980 and 2010.
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Overall
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it is clear that
the figures for visitors coming to the zoo and castle in Edinburgh witnessed an upward trajectory; Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
percentage
of people exploring the aquarium and festival showed a significant Use synonyms
decline
throughout the Use synonyms
period
.
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To begin
with, there was a 10% rise in visitors coming to the zoo from around 10% in 1980 to approximately 20% in 2010. Linking Words
Similarly
, the Linking Words
percentage
of people who enjoyed the castle increased from around 20% to the highest peak at around 45% in 1995. Despite Use synonyms
this
number being followed by a significant Linking Words
decline
to just over 30% Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
, it was still the highest Use synonyms
percentage
in 2010.
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On the other hand
, starting from around 30% in 1980, the Linking Words
percentage
of tourists who enjoyed a festival experienced a slight Use synonyms
decline
to around 25% in 2000. Use synonyms
This
value remained the same and plateaued till the end of the Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
While
the number of people going to the aquarium showed a considerable Linking Words
decline
, after reaching its peak of around 35% in 1985, to just under 10% in 2010.Use synonyms
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