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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010
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The bar chart illustrates
oil
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 generation in six different nations from 1990 and 2010.
It is clear that
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 the amount of
oil
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 production in all countries increased except for Qatar, and that
Saudi
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Arabia
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 saw the biggest change in its capacity.
Additionally
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,
Saudi
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Arabia
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 was the largest
oil
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 manufacturing country over the period shown. In 1990,
Saudi
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Arabia
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 was a leading
oil
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 producer as the amount registered over 8
million
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barrels
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,
while
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 Iran produced about 3
million
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barrels
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.
In contrast
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, there were just under 2
million
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barrels
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 generated in Kuwait, compared to only nearly 1
million
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barrels
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 in Qatar. Meanwhile, the figures for Iraq and UAE were relatively similar, at around 2
million
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barrels
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 each. In 2000, the quantity of
oil
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 created in the UAE remained unchanged, but the other countries experienced slight increases in their figures. In 2010, marginally more
oil
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 was produced in Iran, Iraq, and UEA as illustrated by rises to around 4
million
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barrels
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 each,
whereas
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 the figure for Kuwait reached well under that amount.
In contrast
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, there was a dramatic growth in the figure for
Saudi
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Arabia
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 to over 14
million
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barrels
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,
while
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 Qatar’s figure still stayed extremely low at under 1
million
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barrels
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, saudi, arabia, million, barrels with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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