The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the expenditure and the
profit
money that UAS Use synonyms
children
from charity in the year, 2016.
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Overall
, it can be seen that UAS Linking Words
children
can Use synonyms
profit
the most from donated food. Use synonyms
While
they spend more money on program services. Linking Words
More
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Moreover
over
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apply
their
receive more than they spend.
To commence with revenue, donated food Correct pronoun usage
they
take
the Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
hiegest
sources(86.6). Correct your spelling
highest
Then
the second largest was the community contributions about 10.4%. 2.2 Linking Words
percent
was from program revenue. Investment income and government had the same amount of Change the spelling
per cent
children
's charity Use synonyms
profit
with 0.2% which Use synonyms
were
the smallest number of money. 0.4 per cent from other income.
Turning to their expenditure Correct subject-verb agreement
was
of
program service was considerably highest Change preposition
on
accounted
for 95,8%. 2.6 made by fundraising and 1.6 for Wrong verb form
accounting
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management
manegment
and
general. As we Correct your spelling
management
noticeable
the the Replace the word
notice
children
' charityUse synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
profits
profit
more than their outlay.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words profit, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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