The charts below show the percentages of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the consumed
water
percentage for vary
purposes in six Replace the word
various
parts
of the world
.
Overall
,it is seen that developed parts
of the world
North America
and Europe used water
mainly for industrial purpose
,but developing Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
parts
of the world
South America
,Africa
,central Asia
and Southeast Asia
used it mostly for agriculture.
In detail,developed parts
,such
as North America
used water
nearly 50% for industrial aim;Europe used more than half of its water
for industrial per cent as well.After industrial usage
,in North America
and Europe water
used for agriculture,39% and 32% respectively.Its domestic usage
in respective parts
was 13% and 15%.
In developing parts
of the world
,Central Asia
used 88% of its water
for agricultural purposes.In the second place,Africa
consumed 84% of its water
for agriculture; Southeast Asia
used 81% for the same cause.71% of water
is used for the agri sector in South America
.In the same part of the world
,19% of water
was used for domestic purposes,the highest usage
of its kind.7% domestic use of it in both Central Asia
and Southeast Asia
,and 9% in Africa
.12% industrial usage
was recorded in Southeast Asia
,10% in South America
,7% in Africa
and 9% in Central Asia
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