The charts below show the percentages of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.

The charts below show the percentages of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the consumed
water
percentage for
vary
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purposes in six
parts
of the
world
.
Overall
,it is seen that developed
parts
of the
world
North
America
and Europe used
water
mainly for industrial
purpose
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purposes
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,but developing
parts
of the
world
South
America
,
Africa
,central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
used it mostly for agriculture. In detail,developed
parts
,
such
as North
America
used
water
nearly 50% for industrial aim;Europe used more than half of its
water
for industrial per cent as well.After industrial
usage
,in North
America
and Europe
water
used for agriculture,39% and 32% respectively.Its domestic
usage
in respective
parts
was 13% and 15%. In developing
parts
of the
world
,Central
Asia
used 88% of its
water
for agricultural purposes.In the second place,
Africa
consumed 84% of its
water
for agriculture; Southeast
Asia
used 81% for the same cause.71% of
water
is used for the agri sector in South
America
.In the same part of the
world
,19% of
water
was used for domestic purposes,the highest
usage
of its kind.7% domestic use of it in both Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
,and 9% in
Africa
.12% industrial
usage
was recorded in Southeast
Asia
,10% in South
America
,7% in
Africa
and 9% in Central
Asia
.
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  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • sanitation
  • desalination
  • sustainability
  • aquaculture
  • hygiene
  • desertification
  • potable
  • effluent
  • precipitation
  • groundwater
  • drought
  • water-scarce
  • hydroelectric power
  • water footprint
  • evapotranspiration
  • arid
  • water-intensive
  • reclamation
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