The bar chart shows the percentage of international students enrolled in British universities in two years, 1990 and 2014.
The information given in the chart compares
registered
international student proportion of universities in Britain in 1990 and 2014. The measures Correct article usage
the registered
given
by percentages.
Birmingham,Glasgow and Add the auxiliary verb
are given
Edinbourogh
, Correct your spelling
Edinburgh
overall
, was
approximately doubled over the period , Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
Cardiff was halved. Besides
, Brighton is the university with highest
Correct article usage
the highest
internation
student rate.
One Correct your spelling
international
intertesting
fact in the data is that Liverpool Correct your spelling
interesting
remain
the same with 8% in these given years. In both Bristol and Leads, figures witnessed an increase Change the verb form
remains
by
1 Change preposition
of
percent
, climbing in Bristol to 6%,going up in Leeds to 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Besides
, Brington experienced a grow
from 12% to 13 percent between 2009 and 2014.
Replace the word
growth
On the other hand
, Cardif
is Correct your spelling
Cardiff
only
university which saw a fall by 2 times from 2% to 1%. Add an article
the only
In contrast
, Huddesfield
which has only 1% Correct your spelling
Huddersfield
Change preposition
of student
student
from other countries rocketed to 3% in 2014. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Besides
, figures for Birmingham and Brighton became highest in 2014 with 12% and 13%, respectively.Submitted by orxanmikayilov44 on
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