The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The picture below illustrates the two projected locations for opening new restaurants, which can be built on either the north
side
or the south side
along the Seine River. It seems there could be an obvious advantage of being located on the south side
, which is expected to be right next to the most popular visiting site, the Eiffel Tower
To begin
with the advantages of its location near the left bank, most visitors
to Paris are expected to pass through this
area since the collected number of visitors
each day in this
area recorded about 17,000. Additionally
, it has easier access to the left bank side
because of the convenience of the closer metro station.
However
, the possible location on the north side
of the Seine River also
seems attractive since there are two famous attractions nearby, which are the Maritime Museum which gathers 8,000 visitors
each day, and the Aquarium with 2,000 visitors
each day. Therefore
, approximately 10,000 visitors
might pass by this
area, whose
naturally can be the potential customers for the restaurant.Correct pronoun usage
who
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