some believe studying alone is better and while some others believe group study is far good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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each other and it is more fun and not frustrating someone is around you get distracted and you can focus on each

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that

they

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want Nowadays, studying has become a crucial issue for students and parents. Some

people

are of the opinion that students have to

study

by themselves

although

others think they can learn better in groups.

This

essay will discuss both views and provide my personal opinion. On the one hand, it is argued that we are more efficient when we

study

in

group

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.

Firstly

, the members of

group

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can help

eachother

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each other

to enrich their understanding. It makes them learn properly and solve easily their problems.

In addition

, the more, the merrier

due to

the fact that being in a

group

is not only having more fun but

also

boosting their spirit.

For example

, most

people

can spend more chunks of their time

to

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study

when they are around their peers ,compared with others who

study

on their own.

As a result

, it can be somehow plausible to

study

with your friends. On the one hand, it is believed among

people

that

student

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have to

study

by themselves. To start with, if someone is around us, we might

be

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get distracted, because they would make some noise and so on. thereby, making us lose our

focused

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.

Moreover

, when we

study

alone, we can

study

about

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each subject that we want, but if we were in a

group

,the members of

people

likely have different opinions.

for instance

, someone

want

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to learn physics and

he

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can

focused

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on

this

subject, but if he

was

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in a

group

and others desperately want to learn chemistry , he

would

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learn chemistry apart from physics.

Therefore

, it can be certainly said that it is not only beneficial but

also

necessary. All things considered, I believe,

although

,

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studying in groups has some plus points

such

as having more fun and

reaching

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some help from your peers, there are essentially important

reason

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for studying

by

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our own

such

as choosing a subject which we need and concentrating better.