The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The maps illustrate the
island
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before and after becoming a tourist attraction place.
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, the
island
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was
initially
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untouched and maintained the main natural shape,
while
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some facilities were added
such
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as transportation, accommodations, and recreational parts. As can be seen on the first map, there are some local trees in the east and middle of the
island
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which remained unchanged after modification, and there is a beach in the west and a swimming area is organized next to it. Regarding the second map, reception is located at the
center
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, there is a vehicle track connecting the restaurant at the north to the pier
in
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the south of the map, on the pier side, there is an attraction in which tourists can sail by sailing boat.
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, the accommodations are situated on the west of the
island
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and
the
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right side of the reception next to the natural trees, the footpaths are used in these areas,
also
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a route leading the tourists to the beach.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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