The Graph Above Shows Information About Employment Rates Across 6 Countries in 1995 and 2005

The bar graphs illustrate the percentage changes in employment in six different nations among

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males

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and

females

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in one decade from 1995 to 2005.

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,

Iceland

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headed the list for

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in

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years

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Switzerland

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for

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. The occupation rates increased for

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males

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and

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in 2005. In 1995, the employment

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in

Iceland

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for

males

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was around 70% and in

Switzerland

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for

females

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nearly 55%

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are the first runner among all the countries,

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,

Australia

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, New

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and the

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vary between 55% to 66% for

males

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.

Likewise

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, for

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females the

females

Australia

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and New

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had almost the same

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around 25%,

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50% and 45% in

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and

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respectively. In the year 2005,

Iceland

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reached more than 80% employment

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followed by

Switzerland

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and

Australia

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with almost 80% and 70% respectively for

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.

Further

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remain the

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70%.

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Switzerland

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rate

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increased by almost 10% and reached nearly 75%.

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, in the

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and the

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it was approximately 60%

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it was nearly 50%, 40% and 38% in

Iceland

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, New

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and

Australia

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respectively.