The chart below shows the results of two surveys carried out thirty years apart on how young people in a town travel to school.

The two pie charts below illustrate the results

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two surveys about how children travel to

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, the different methods of transport have increased over the time period. Walking was the previously most commonly used avenue but

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has been replaced by the public

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family and

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increased

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homeschooling. Looking at the charts in more detail, in 1975 the majority of children walked showing a number of 44%. Half

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statistic would use the public

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, at 28%. Biking and the

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had relatively the same figures of 11 and 9. A friend’s or family

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and homeschooling were the lowest, with the numbers respectively being 3,4 and 1. In 2005, the number of children walking to

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had halved to only 17% and nearly a quarter now preferred to use the public

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, which had a numeric of 24%.

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was followed by the family

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at 21%. Cycling had decreased to 7,

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friends

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,

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and homeschooling had all increased. The numbers for these

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10, 16 and 5.