The diagram details the process of producing olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture demonstrates the process of olive oil production.
Overall
, it is clear that
the process proceeds in 3 distinct stages which are harvesting olive plants, production of the oil and ending by storing it.
The very first step begins with the olives being harvested from the plants and collected in a vat. After washing the leaves with water, they would be crushed by an olive miller that provides olive paste as an output. Next,
the paste would be sent to a centrifugal press which generates virgin oils press after passing through a malaxer with a temperature of 27 degrees.
Subsequently
, the virgin material is then
either separated or decanted before being stored to end the processSubmitted by mirhashemim7 on
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