The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The provided pie chart represents how
police
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budget was spent on various criteria
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the column and raws chart gives information about the amounts and sources of police allocation received in 2017 and 2018. As can be seen
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table,the highest portion of money belongs to the national government which was 175.5
million
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pounds in 2017 and it has risen to 177.8
million
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in 2018. And 91.2
million
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owned by local taxes in 2017.one year later it increased dramatically to 102.3
million
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. A small portion of the total is owned by other sources.we can see that as approximately 38 to 38.5
million
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. The pie chart reveals that a large percentage of the police allocation was spent on salaries in both years. But in 2018 it has dropped significantly by 6% compared to 2017.Meanwhile building and transportation expenditures remain constantly the same at 17%. It could be noticeable that the expenses on technology services have grown since it was 8% in 2017 and 14% in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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