The pie charts below show the average household expenditure in japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditure in japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The pie chart demonstrates the mediocre homestead spending in
Japan
and
Malaysia
in 2010. The essay describes the main points and compares the key information.
Overall
, the significant cost of household other goods and services and food in
Japan
, contrast in
Malaysia
housing is the prominent sector where they spend more finance.
Moreover
, the expenditure on healthcare and transport in
Japan
was double the figures for
Malaysia
. With regards to Housing expenditure, the Malaysian people spent a large portion of finance about 34%
whereas
the trajectory was only 21 per cent cost in
Japan
.
In addition
, the cost of other goods and services is a significant ratio of about 29% in
Japan
,
besides
26% of spending money in
Malaysia
.
On the other hand
, the amount of food was quite similar about 24% in
Japan
and 27 per cent in
Malaysia
respectively. Meanwhile, the expenses for transport were about 20% in
Japan
which was half in
Malaysia
. Though the health sector is crucial for individuals, they allocate very negligible amounts of funding
such
as 6% and 3% proportionately.
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