The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013.

The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013.
The line graph given provides information regarding the distribution of various digital platform
users
in Jamestown in 2018.
Overall
, the general trend of Jamestown’s social
media
users
showed that the older people were, the less likely they would be to use digital networking. In terms of the most significant feature of the chart, the largest category of digital networking
users
was the group aged 13 to 25, which accounted for two-fifths of the whole proportion.
Additionally
, the next major distribution was adults between
aged
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26 to 35 who made up 35% of the total population using different types of
media
channels. When added together, these two categories made up three-quarters of Jamestown’s social
media
citizens in 2018. In stark contrast, the category with the lowest percentage comprised 15%
people
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aged 36-45, 8% 46-55 years old, and only 2% over 55 years old. Of particular note is that those aged over 36 collectively made up only 25% of Jamestown’s social
media
users
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words users, media with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social media platforms
  • User base
  • Popularity
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Emergent
  • Consolidation
  • Statistics
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant shift
  • Pie chart interpretation
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