The chart below show the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.

The diagrams compare the variety of

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activities of

day

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doing

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in 1958 and in 2008.

Overall

, both of the

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show people spent

their

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most daily hours

on

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working.

Firstly

, in 1958, the highest time

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people spent was on working with the number of 33%. It

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increased

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%

throughout

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50 years.

Moreover

, the second biggest

activity

was sleeping which

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1% under

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working's

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percentage. It

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also

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in

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second place in 2008, but it went down to 25%.

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the

activity

like

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out with family and friends was the third rank in 1958 with 19%.

However

,

this

aspect was the smallest percentage in 2008 with roughly 6% as same as the percentage of other

activity

in that year.

Lastly

, the remaining 16% was spent on relaxing at home, travelling to work, and other

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in 1958.

On the other hand

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stood at 27%.