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The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts compare the popularity of
transport
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 forms chosen by
people
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 in the UK in 2008 and 2018.
Overall
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, the general trend showed that the majority of
people
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 in Cambridge chose cars and buses as their choices of
transportation
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 in 2008.
However
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, more individuals preferred walking and cycling as their modes of
transportation
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 after a decade.
To begin
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 with, cars were more
favored
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 in terms of vehicle
transport
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 in 2008, selected by 42% of
people
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.
This
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 was followed by bus usage at 30%.
Therefore
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, there were 72% of
people
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 collectively used these forms of
transportation
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. Over the next decade, the proportion of private vehicle usage declined significantly and it was the least popular
transport
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 form in 2018.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of
people
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 who chose buses as a means of
transportation
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 fell slightly by 5%. In terms of other modes of
transportation
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, walking and cycling were an unpopular option in the beginning. Bicycle
transport
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 was chosen by 17% of
people
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 and
traveling
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travelling
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 by foot only 11%.
Nevertheless
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, cycling and walking experienced a considerable increase by 2018 in popularity. Of particular note is that their collective use has made up more than half of selected
transportation
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 methods in 2018.
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