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The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts compare the popularity of
transport
 forms chosen by
people
 in the UK in 2008 and 2018.
Overall
, the general trend showed that the majority of
people
 in Cambridge chose cars and buses as their choices of
transportation
 in 2008.
However
, more individuals preferred walking and cycling as their modes of
transportation
 after a decade.
To begin
 with, cars were more
favored
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 in terms of vehicle
transport
 in 2008, selected by 42% of
people
.
This
 was followed by bus usage at 30%.
Therefore
, there were 72% of
people
 collectively used these forms of
transportation
. Over the next decade, the proportion of private vehicle usage declined significantly and it was the least popular
transport
 form in 2018.
On the other hand
, the percentage of
people
 who chose buses as a means of
transportation
 fell slightly by 5%. In terms of other modes of
transportation
, walking and cycling were an unpopular option in the beginning. Bicycle
transport
 was chosen by 17% of
people
 and
traveling
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 by foot only 11%.
Nevertheless
, cycling and walking experienced a considerable increase by 2018 in popularity. Of particular note is that their collective use has made up more than half of selected
transportation
 methods in 2018.
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