The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.
The pie chart depicts the results of a survey of eight common leisure activities in the United States of America between 1999 and 2009.
Overall
, it is explicitly observed that the American's
enjoyed walking the most.Change noun form
Americans
In addition
, it is evident that people enjoy outdoor activities more than indoor activities.
It is crystal clear that the most popular leisure activity in 1999 and 2009 was walking, which was around 29% and 31%, respectively,whereas
soccer was the second most popular activity in the year 1999, which showed a figure of 17% and later on a slight increase of 18% by 2009. Between 1999 and 2009, the popularity of swimming increased from 9% to 18%, whereas
there was a decline in demand between 1999 and 2009, from around 13% to 4%.
Regarding jogging, bicycling, and yoga, in 2009, fewer Americans enjoyed these sports than 10 years earlier.The most significant decrease was seen in the figure of
aerobics, at 13% in 1999, as opposed to merely 4% in 2009, Change preposition
for
whereas
the popularity of bicycling was 7%, respectively.Submitted by crpnivedya.prasannan on
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