The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart indicates eight categories
which
families' weekly income was spent in a country in 1968 and 2018. In general, the most significant expenditure in 1968 was on food, Change preposition
in which
while
in 2018, people mostly spent their money on leisure.
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According to
the figure, in 1968 eating was the most important part of the week, resulting in families allocating 35% of their income to buy food. They allocated the same amount of money for housing and buying clothes and shoes which accounted for 10% of the total. The expenditure in other categories was almost the same, each less than 9 Linking Words
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the lowest spending was Linking Words
for
fuel and power, which was about 6%.
As can be seen, in 2018, people mostly spent their money Change preposition
on
on
their free time, which accounted Change preposition
in
around
22 Change preposition
for around
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
In
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This
this
year, families spent about two times more of their income on housing Linking Words
in compare
to fifty years before by around 20%. Change preposition
compared
However
, Linking Words
the
fuel and power cover a smaller portion of the spending, by only 4 Correct article usage
apply
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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