The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.

#expenditures #four #car #companies #uk

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The information given in the table illustrates

cost

Add an article

the cost

show examples

of 4 car

manufactors

Correct your spelling

manufacturers

for advertising in the UK in 2002. The measures are given by millions of

dollars

Use synonyms

. The figures for the TV and the press ,

overall

Linking Words

, are highest,

while

Linking Words

the numbers for cinema and outdoor are less than others. It is

interesting

Correct article usage

an interesting

show examples

fact that Ranault is a car

comapny

Correct your spelling

company

which

spendmore

Correct your spelling

spends more

money on advertising than Rover, Vauxlux and Cetirizine. One necessary fact is that

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

spending amounts on advertising with

press

Add an article

the press

show examples

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

fluctuated between 8 and 45

milion

Correct your spelling

million

dollars

Use synonyms

for different companies

while

Linking Words

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

the figures for radio

Correct subject-verb agreement

are

show examples

same

Correct article usage

the same

show examples

at 15 million

dollars

Use synonyms

Besides

Linking Words

, costs for the TV

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

start from 45 million

dollars

Use synonyms

thats

Correct your spelling

that's

why,

this

Linking Words

is the highest category.

Although

Linking Words

Rover and Cetirizine never advertise their cars at the cinema, Renault and Rover spend approximately 6 million

dollars

Use synonyms

On the other hand

Linking Words

, advertising

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

cars

Change preposition

apply

show examples

outdoor

Replace the word

outdoors

show examples

is not popular for companies and the figures for their expenditures are between 2 and 7.

Submitted by orxanmikayilov44 on Tue Dec 26 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

▼

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.
The maps bellow compares between, the layout of Porth Harbour in 2000 with its appearance today.
5
band
The government’s investment in arts, music, and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The government resources are limited so it is important to ensure their way of spending wisely and consider public needs. Is it wise enough to spend government money on “important but not urgent” things while there are higher priorities?. Some argue that authority entities should support any cultural program such as art, music or theater. However, I strongly believe to some extent that government has higher priorities, such as education sector and health care sector
5.5
band
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers ahould be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe thay should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Few individuals think that jobs like doctors and engineers should serve their motherland where they got training, whereas others believe that they should go foreign countries where they want. I support former view because of owns state development.
<4
band
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
The migration of youthful people from countryside to megapolises and towns is a growing trend worldwide. This shift often results in a demographic imbalance leaving only elderly people to live in the countryside that causes decline in the workforce. To adress this problem the infrastructure in countryside should be improved. This essay will discuss the problems caused by this and suggest possible solutions.
7
band
In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary epoch, a certain proportion of people are shifting their purchases to the huge shopping centres rather than visiting to local traders of their area. In my opinion, there are various drawbacks to this scenario. This essay will delve into the advantages and disadvantages of this change and will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.

The government’s investment in arts, music, and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers ahould be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe thay should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.