The pie charts show rage devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two years

The pie charts show rage devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two years
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of six different types of devices (mobile phone, conventional
TV
, tablet, laptop, flat-screen
TV
and desktop computer) utilised by young adults in Canada in 2009 and 2019. The results are given in
percent
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.
Overall
, in the first
year
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the most popular apparatus used by Canadians was conventional
TV
,
however
, it was replaced by flat-screen
TV
in the ten-year period.
Furthermore
, tablets were
initially
the least common tool but were ultimately substituted with conventional
TV
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TVs
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. The usage rates in all kinds of devices changed marginally in over ten years. In 2009, it was reported that most young people preferred conventional
TV
with
an
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usage rate of 34%, but
this
figure witnessed a substantial decrease of one-third to 4% in the second year.
This
led to flat-screens replacement as the leading tool boasting a rise of about one-fifth to 27% 10 years later. In terms of the remaining apparatus, the percentage of Canadians reporting to use tablets and mobile phones climbed from 5% and 15% respectively in 2009 to approximately
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each in 2019. The proportion of those who reported using desktop computers and laptops fell by around 7% to 12% each.
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