The chart below shows the results of two surveys, carried out at the beginning and end of the year, asking a restaurant's unhappy customers why they were dissatisfied with their experience.

The chart below shows the results of two surveys, carried out at the beginning and end of the year, asking a restaurant's unhappy customers why they were dissatisfied with their experience.
The pie chart below illustrates the results of two surveys which asked customers of a restaurant why they were unhappy with their
meal
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.
Overall
, at the start of the
year
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year,
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the main reason was
due to
rude staff but
this
decreased and was replaced with noise
at the end
of the year. Another big cause was the food was too expensive and
this
consisted
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over the time period. The ambience and quality of the meal were the least
sited
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reasons. In January more than a quarter of customers complained about the staff giving a figure of 27%. In
November
this
statistic halved to 13%. In January, poor menu choices had a statistic of 16, which slightly fell to 13 in
November
. The expense of the restaurant increased in dissatisfaction in
November
, the figures respectively being 12 and 15. In
November
the biggest problem was the noise,
this
had risen from 9 to 24.
On the other hand
, the food quality and ambience had decreased over
this
time period, falling from 7 and 6 to an equal number of 3. Waiting for service remained the same, whilst other contributors grew from 6 to 9.
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