In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs.

Nowadays, a
numerious
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numerous
of white-collar
jobs
people
such
as doctors, engineers and IT specialists are migrating from smaller or
economically
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countries to wealthier nations for
enhanched
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enhanced
careers
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career
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prospective
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perspective
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and personal growth.
This
essay addresses these problems that result in a lack of
jobs
and
also
proposes effective solutions to deal with
this
issue.
To begin
with, a large number of
high
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skilled professionals move
due to
a limited
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limited jobs
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jobs
and a better
future
for
own
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and their
childen
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children
because these countries give them
high paying
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jobs
based on their skills and
the
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apply
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free
education
to
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for
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their children.
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is
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a major effect on the poor countries will
be
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loose
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their top professionals and
potential skills
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people and
also
impact
on
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growth and economy.
For
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results
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result
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, these
counties
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countries
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will
be
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face in the
future
a shortage of
their
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apply
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skilled workers, which they critically impact
on
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apply
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the
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apply
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education
, medicine, and other filed. On the other side, these are
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the solution
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solution
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solutions
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that can help to
overcoming
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problems, the
government
take the responsibility to control
future
talent
not
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and not
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go to
other country
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another country
other countries
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. They should be reduced the retuirement age so that new talent
opportunity
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opportunities
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to
applied
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apply for
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jobs
and another point
is
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should be improved
wages standard
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wage standards
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and
modifed
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modified
based on
the
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apply
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skils
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skills
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and
experienced
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.
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, after
sometime
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some time
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if the
government
is
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does
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not
taken
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it seriously
then
the
shortage
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a shortage
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of highly skilled
worker
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workers
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.
Such
as, the
adminstraion
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administration
pass
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the
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a
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law for every
people
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person
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to
given
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the
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fix
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fixed
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service
of
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the first five years after completing their
education
served for country after that if they are not satisfied with the
jobs
then
move to another nation. In conclusion, the migration of skilled professionals
form
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from
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smaller or
econmically
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economically
challenged to richer
nation
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nations
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poses significant challenges.
However
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the
government
should make
the
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apply
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some changes in rules
then
easily save their
future
talent. The
government
should
be
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apply
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provide
jobs
based on their skills and improve the infrastructure and level of
education
and the medical sector.
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