The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
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The two maps illustrate the university
courts
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from 1990 to the present moment.
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, it is readily apparent that the number of total
courts
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for tennis and basketball has increased at the expense of parking and a
park
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,
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a formal building with a gym now houses various exercise facilities. These changes allow for more varied
activity
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. In 1990, on the left side of the map was a
park
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with trees and grass
as well as
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a car
park
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. Today, the
park
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has been replaced by a large basketball court and the car
park
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by 4 tennis
courts
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. On the right side of the map, a structure to contain the various athletic facilities has been erected with only the indoor pool and reception area in the same position in the new building. The changing room beneath the reception area and
pool
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the pool
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has
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been lengthened and moved slightly to the right so as to line up directly above a new, large fitness
center
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. The fitness
center
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has replaced two tennis
courts
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, now outside the main building.
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