As technology helps to gain access to information, fact teaching should be removed and school should focus on developing skills and talents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the globalisation era, technology

have

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widely been used to

finding

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crucial

informations

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information

pieces of information

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which resulted in lesser importance of

fact

teaching and should be replaced by

skills

and talent

developing

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. I align with

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opinion as

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believe that schools should replace the burdening

fact

teaching with

skills

enhancing curriculum.

To begin

with, culture and technology have widely spread in fast distribution, as we

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today "globalisation". The use of smart tech tools for easier information flow has been developed to an exquisite state with the function to support

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productivity.

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, in recent times, one only needs to scroll and press

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times on their phone display in order to find the full history of America or to call relatives in

other country

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another country

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far away. The

advantages

of smartphones and smart technologies are undeniably amazing. With the

advantages

stated, smartphones

also

affect the way we study today.

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easy flow of information and knowledge,

therefore decreasing

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the urgency of demanding

fact

teaching to students.

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era supported students to explore beyond the books and facts, to be aware of their talents and

skill

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skills

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in order to produce distinctive individuals

that

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are ready

impact

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the world with their experiences.

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,

school

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nowadays should

put

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more attention to the talents and

skills

the students

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. In conclusion,

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believe that

skills

and talent enhancing curriculum are

bringin

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bringing

more

advantages

than the old

fact

teaching curriculum. Especially, supported

with

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the globalisation and more advanced technological era, people

sould

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should

could

would

make the most

goods

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out of these

advantages

.