The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two maps display two phases of the Lynwich
College
site by illustrating the developments that occurred between 2006 and now and showing the significant expansion of
facilities
. It is obvious that there is an enormous change in the
college
’s site, except for the first and second
college
buildings that remain unchanged.
Moreover
, the total layout has greatly changed since the construction of a cafeteria located at the
center
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and a library building that replaces the old one. The cafeteria became a focal point connecting all the
college
facilities
.
Therefore
, there is a great improvement in
sports
facilities
with the expansion of the
sports
field and the construction of a new
sports
center
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.
In addition
,
while
in 2006 the
college
only provided a park for those who have cars, now there is a space provided for bicycles at
this
park, and there are improvements by adding a bus stop with a direct new path to the campus.
However
, the green space is dramatically decreased by all these constructions.
Overall
, we can see
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great innovation in the design of the Lynwich site, keeping the main two buildings without changes, resulting in increased accessibility for students
as well as
improved
sports
and dining
facilities
.
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  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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