The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps display two phases of the Lynwich

College

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site by illustrating the developments that occurred between 2006 and now and showing the significant expansion of

facilities

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. It is obvious that there is an enormous change in the

college

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’s site, except for the first and second

college

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buildings that remain unchanged.

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, the total layout has greatly changed since the construction of a cafeteria located at the

center

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and a library building that replaces the old one. The cafeteria became a focal point connecting all the

college

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facilities

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, there is a great improvement in

sports

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facilities

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with the expansion of the

sports

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field and the construction of a new

sports

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center

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In addition

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while

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in 2006 the

college

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only provided a park for those who have cars, now there is a space provided for bicycles at

this

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park, and there are improvements by adding a bus stop with a direct new path to the campus.

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, the green space is dramatically decreased by all these constructions.

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, we can see

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great innovation in the design of the Lynwich site, keeping the main two buildings without changes, resulting in increased accessibility for students

as well as

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improved

sports

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and dining

facilities

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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, facilities, sports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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