The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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successful person in the future,

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they try to build some essential qualities.

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, some of them argue that academic educations are not the appropriate sources for

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needs. I do not agree with

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statement, since university can provide both hard skills and soft skills which can be a

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for people to gain victory.

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with, academic institutions have an intense curriculum that we should not

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as financial management.

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industrial era, it is mandatory for managers to be literate about finance, especially when they run a profit-oriented business.

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, several universities in Jakarta have set a mandatory subject package which

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financial education in the first year term.

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, as they graduate, they will not be surprised to run a business or

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in a corporation as they already have a sufficient provision.

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is a perfect arena

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collaboration skills.

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happens because most of the learning methods are conducted in group projects,

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it fosters people's ability to communicate and work as a team. If,

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, students are used to

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well in a group project, it can be said that they are ready to face the professional realm.

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is an intangible role from

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that can prepare someone to become a successful person.

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, it is true that victory

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preparation, and to be a successful person, several qualities must be built. I believe academic

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as universities and equivalents, can act as the main

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to supply valuable provisions, both from technical and emotional intelligence.