The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides the complete recycling process of glass.
Overall
, The recycling process is divided into 6 steps and all the steps will continue
iterate as a cycle.
Add the particle
continue to
Firstly
, the cycle is started
with the officer Wrong verb form
starts
picks
the glass materials from the recycle bin and Wrong verb form
picking
loads
all materials into a big carrier called Wrong verb form
loading
lorry
. After that, the lorry will mobilize all the materials into a place called Correct article usage
a lorry
treatment
plant. Correct article usage
a treatment
Whereas
at the plant, the glasses
will be cleaned first by using the washing and sterilizing machine
.
Secondly
, after the sterilization
the Add a comma
sterilization,
glasses
are ready to be recycled. However
, these glasses
will not be used completely as they will be crushed by a crushing machine
. While
at the melting machine
, all the glasses
will be melted into substances, so they can be processed easily using moulding
Add an article
the moulding
a moulding
machine
. The moulding machine
will form the substances into new bottles then
the delivery trucks will pick the
new bottles and distribute them to the supermarket Change preposition
up the
as
the cycle will start again.Correct word choice
and
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