the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare the share of age groups categorized into three ranges and anticipate the data until 2050 in Yamen and Italy.
Overall
, the proportion of youngsters is a significant figure in all periods. it is predicted that the 15-59-year-olds will increase in Yemen,
while
that for Italy is going to decrease. As can be seen in Yemen, 60
years
and over accounted for half of the population, followed by groups of 15-59 ranked lower by a narrow margin(46.3%). The former is anticipated to fall by 13% and the latter will experience a rise of approximately 10%.
In contrast
to elderies, The portion under 15
years
old had the lowest amount at 3.6% in 2000,
although
it witnessed a rise, it remained the same place. Regarding Italy, in 2000 just over 60% were 15-59
years
old which is predicted to reduce to under half of the percentage in 2050. The 60
years
stood at second place and saw a rise of 16% in 2050 at 42 %. In comparison with Yemen, the population of elderly experienced a reduction of 3% and
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  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
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