The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts everyday sales of meals at Brisk Café by summer and
winter
. the data has been calibrated in servings. Use synonyms
overall
, in Linking Words
winter
the sales of hot Use synonyms
coffee
were the best-selling item. Use synonyms
However
, iced Linking Words
coffee
was sold the most during summer.
First and foremost, about 70 per Use synonyms
day
in Use synonyms
winter
hot Use synonyms
coffee
has been purchased. Use synonyms
meanwhile
only 30 of hot Add a comma
meanwhile,
coffee
is sold during warm temperature season. Use synonyms
moreover
, soup is Linking Words
also
one of the best during cold weather, with around 50 every Linking Words
day
people bought. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, only half of the Linking Words
winter
figure soup was consumed in the warm season Use synonyms
approximatly
25 per Correct your spelling
approximately
day
. Use synonyms
likewise
, iced Linking Words
coffee
was people's Use synonyms
favorite
in the warmer situation, 40 Change the spelling
favourite
in
every single Change preposition
apply
day
was sold. Use synonyms
In contrast
, iced Linking Words
coffee
was the least Use synonyms
favorite
in Change the spelling
favourite
Use synonyms
winter
period, only 3 in a Add an article
the winter
day
Use synonyms
have
been bought.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, everyone loves ice cream in both seasons, Linking Words
25
sold on cool days and 35 on hot days. Apart from that people eat salad without considering the weather. Salad purchase was balanced in both Correct word choice
with 25
season
, 25 in a Change to a plural noun
seasons
day
respectively.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words winter, coffee, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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