The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.

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What is given is a clear illustration of three different group ages of two countries, namely Yemen and Italy from 2000, and anticipated for 50

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later.

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, the highest amount of

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belongs to

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from age 15-59, except for Yemen in 2000. Looking more closely at the chart of Yemen, it has the younger

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, in 2000, the first age group was 0-14

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which contained half of the

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. After that, 15-59

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has a similar amount (46%). At least, the old

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accounted for 3.%. the anticipated result, after 50

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, shows that the young

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increase by about 10

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, and the old

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rise by a small portion.

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, the proportion of children up to 14

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old has fallen from 50%, in 2000, to 37%, in 2050. Regarding Italy, the young

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had the highest amount in 2000, and

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secondly

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years

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and older

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have a fifth portion of the

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. The prediction depicts that the portion of youngsters decreased to approximately 46%.

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, 42.3% of Italian

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are old

people

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. Ultimately, the number of children under 14 decreased by around 3

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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