The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.
What is given is a clear illustration of three different group ages of two countries, namely Yemen and Italy from 2000, and anticipated for 50
years
later.
Overall
, the highest amount of
population
belongs to
people
from age 15-59, except for Yemen in 2000. Looking more closely at the chart of Yemen, it has the younger
population
, in 2000, the first age group was 0-14
years
which contained half of the
population
. After that, 15-59
years
has a similar amount (46%). At least, the old
population
accounted for 3.%. the anticipated result, after 50
years
, shows that the young
population
increase by about 10
percent
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, and the old
population
rise by a small portion.
However
, the proportion of children up to 14
years
old has fallen from 50%, in 2000, to 37%, in 2050. Regarding Italy, the young
population
had the highest amount in 2000, and
secondly
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60
years
and older
people
have a fifth portion of the
population
. The prediction depicts that the portion of youngsters decreased to approximately 46%.
In addition
, 42.3% of Italian
people
are old
people
. Ultimately, the number of children under 14 decreased by around 3
percent
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.
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