The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
The line graph illustrates the total number of people who attended three distinct entertainment activities
while
the table provides information about the entrance fee in the year 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that although
the vast majority of people attended the cinema however
, its admission fees were the lowest not only for a single ticket but also
for families. In addition
, while
few folks showed interest in sports, its admission fees were expensive.
To begin
with, more than 1000 people showed an interest in cinema in that year. This
was the highest as compared to other sectors, nonetheless
, the get fee was not expensive. Just 15 dollars
per one individual and 55 for four populace. Moreover
, visiting the theme park was the second choice. Almost 400 mankind visited such
a place although
its attendance was not high , however
, its gate fee was expensive 70 dollars
per individual and 216 dollars
for a family.
By contrast
, the populace showed the least interest in sports. Less than 200 individuals participated nevertheless
, its fees were the most expensive among the other sectors. It ranges from 71 to 75 dollars
per person and 280 to 298 dollars
per family.Submitted by mboadi211 on
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