The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
The line graph illustrates the total number of people who attended three distinct entertainment activities
while
the table provides information about the entrance fee in the year 2009.
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Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
although
the vast majority of people attended the cinema Linking Words
however
, its admission fees were the lowest not only for a single ticket but Linking Words
also
for families. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
while
few folks showed interest in sports, its admission fees were expensive.
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To begin
with, more than 1000 people showed an interest in cinema in that year. Linking Words
This
was the highest as compared to other sectors, Linking Words
nonetheless
, the get fee was not expensive. Just 15 Linking Words
dollars
per one individual and 55 for four populace. Use synonyms
Moreover
, visiting the theme park was the second choice. Almost 400 mankind visited Linking Words
such
a place Linking Words
although
its attendance was not high , Linking Words
however
, its gate fee was expensive 70 Linking Words
dollars
per individual and 216 Use synonyms
dollars
for a family.
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By contrast
, the populace showed the least interest in sports. Less than 200 individuals participated Linking Words
nevertheless
, its fees were the most expensive among the other sectors. It ranges from 71 to 75 Linking Words
dollars
per person and 280 to 298 Use synonyms
dollars
per family.Use synonyms
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