You are planning a week long vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, - tell your neighbour that you are going away - ask your neighbour to take care of your house for you - explain what tasks you would like your neighbour to do.

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Dear Vinita , Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am going to my native for two weeks to attend my

sister

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sister's

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wedding. I am

traveling

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travelling

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from 15th November to 30th November , During my absence

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would like to request you please take care of my house

along with

some work i.e. pour water in my plants twice

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apply

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a week and feed my cat on

daily

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a daily

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basis , I

kept

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keep

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her food container near

staircase

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the staircase

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Furthermore

also

check my letter box as I am expecting my promotion letter from my employer

this

month. Sorry for giving you trouble but as I know you , You are

such

a generous person and a helpful neighbour. On

14th

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evening

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will

handover

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hand over

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my spare key to you. Waiting for a positive reply from your end. Thanking you Mohini

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure there is a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to enhance logical structure.

Coherence and Cohesion

While your greeting and closure were appropriate, consider using a more formal sign-off for semi-formal letters.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to maintain one idea per paragraph to increase clarity and cohesion.

Task Achievement

You have addressed all the tasks required by the question.

Task Achievement

Maintain a consistent and suitable writing tone throughout; consider slightly more formal language to match the semi-formal nature of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

147 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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