The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram shows the process of brick manufacturing procedure for the building industry. The process includes seven steps to get the final product to be delivered.
Firstly
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, as seen in the image clay is collected by a digger from the ground and a metal grid is used to drain and break it into small chunks. After those chunks are mixed with water and sand employees convert
this
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mixture to a brick shape using a mould or a wire cutter.
Thereafter
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they dried those
bricks
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for one to two days in a drying oven and forwarded a moderate kiln which has 200-980 Celsius degrees temperature and 870-1300 Celsius high-temperature kiln respectively. Afterwards, burnt
bricks
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are kept in a cooling chamber for two to three days before
bricks
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are packed to be delivered.
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,we can see there are 7 steps to manufacture proper
bricks
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and all steps play a crucial role in the process.
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